finished c00/30/03. #61

2021-06-12T16:22:18Z

GenericUser394753 commented

2021-06-12 16:22:18 +00:00

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this is done before using the dupe tool

GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) reviewed

2021-06-12 16:33:40 +00:00

Translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c00/30/03/5/translation.txt

					
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does this sound ok? i'm a bit on the fence with this one, but i wanted to avoid words like "raped" and stuff since it doesn't seem like it was that kind of interaction, i think "surprised" would fit more, but it lacks the sexual connotation that she conveys in her tone(this line was corresponding to slavery intimacy)... sexually assaulted was the closest i could think of, but feels a bit rigid. just plain assaulted was a close 2nd choice...

SpockBauru (Migrated from github.com) requested changes

2021-06-12 19:55:25 +00:00

Translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c00/30/03/3/translation.txt

					
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……。すみません、突然のことでしたので、身体の準備は万全ではありませんが……どうぞお使いください。=...I'm sorry, this is rather sudden so I haven't finished getting my body ready yet, but... You're welcome to use it.

```suggestion ……。すみません、突然のことでしたので、身体の準備は万全ではありませんが……どうぞお使いください。=...I'm sorry, this is rather sudden so I haven't finished getting my body ready yet, but... You're welcome to use it. ```

Translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c00/30/03/4/translation.txt

					
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はふ……あなたを想いながら自慰に耽っているところに現れるとは……日頃の行いが良いのでしょうか。=Ahnn... Showing up while I'm thinking of you and masturbating... I guess doing this daily payed off.

```suggestion はふ……あなたを想いながら自慰に耽っているところに現れるとは……日頃の行いが良いのでしょうか。=Ahnn... Showing up while I'm thinking of you and masturbating... I guess doing this daily payed off. ```

Translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c00/30/03/4/translation.txt

はぁ、出ていってください、という言葉が通じるのであれば、そもそもこんな無粋な行為自体行わないでしょうね……=Haaah, if had you been educated enough to understand the words "please get out", you wouldn't have barged in here in the first place...

```suggestion はぁ、出ていってください、という言葉が通じるのであれば、そもそもこんな無粋な行為自体行わないでしょうね……=Haaah, if had you been educated enough to understand the words "please get out", you wouldn't have barged in here in the first place... ```

GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) reviewed

2021-06-12 20:22:34 +00:00

Translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c00/30/03/4/translation.txt

this one actually is as i intended, this form of conditional doesn't use "if". it's a bit more formal, and that fits her more, she doesn't like the guy here and tries to distance herself from his rude ass :P

if you really want to, i can change it to an if sentence(needs a few more touches), but i do think this fits the context better.

this one actually is as i intended, this form of conditional doesn't use "if". it's a bit more formal, and that fits her more, she doesn't like the guy here and tries to distance herself from his rude ass :P if you really want to, i can change it to an if sentence(needs a few more touches), but i do think this fits the context better.

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