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2 commits, an initial translation of c00/30/04->14 and an extra adding sounds as per indication. planning to use dupe tool after this #63

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GenericUser394753 commented 2021-06-14 22:06:48 +00:00 (Migrated from github.com)
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a couple folders are missing because they are identical, dupe tool will handle them.

a couple folders are missing because they are identical, dupe tool will handle them.
SpockBauru (Migrated from github.com) reviewed 2021-06-14 22:32:01 +00:00
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Just little things, Good job!

Just little things, Good job!
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SpockBauru (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-14 22:26:19 +00:00
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？　どうしました？　妻である私があなたと入浴を共にするなんて、当たり前の事ですよ？=Hm? What's the matter? As your wife, it's only natural for me to take a bath with you, isn't it?
```suggestion ？　どうしました？　妻である私があなたと入浴を共にするなんて、当たり前の事ですよ？=Hm? What's the matter? As your wife, it's only natural for me to take a bath with you, isn't it? ```
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SpockBauru (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-14 22:28:48 +00:00
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Maybe okay is a little repetitive

Maybe `okay` is a little repetitive
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SpockBauru (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-14 22:30:40 +00:00
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んじゅ、朝一番のあいしゃつは、じゅぷる、誰ひも、ゆじゅれましぇん……=...I came here... *Slurp*... To tell you good mo'ming....
```suggestion んじゅ、朝一番のあいしゃつは、じゅぷる、誰ひも、ゆじゅれましぇん……=...I came here... *Slurp*... To tell you good mo'ming.... ```
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SpockBauru (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-14 22:29:46 +00:00
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んちゅ、じゅぷっ……あしゃから、お元気れしゅね……んじゅ、わたひも、気合がはいりましゅ……=...*Slurp*... You're so perky in the morning... *Lick*... I'll rise to the challenge...
```suggestion んちゅ、じゅぷっ……あしゃから、お元気れしゅね……んじゅ、わたひも、気合がはいりましゅ……=...*Slurp*... You're so perky in the morning... *Lick*... I'll rise to the challenge... ```
GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) reviewed 2021-06-14 22:38:56 +00:00
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GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-14 22:38:55 +00:00
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oh, definitely, nice find, no idea how i missed that

oh, definitely, nice find, no idea how i missed that
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) reviewed 2021-06-15 11:32:21 +00:00
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:29:25 +00:00
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She's actually asking, so maybe

あなたが覗かれていると踏んで、少々大胆に放尿していたのですがお気づきになられたでしょうか？=Did you notice I was a bit daring while peeing, because I thought you watching?
She's actually asking, so maybe ```suggestion あなたが覗かれていると踏んで、少々大胆に放尿していたのですがお気づきになられたでしょうか？=Did you notice I was a bit daring while peeing, because I thought you watching? ```
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:31:51 +00:00
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It's like "if you want to watch, fine, but don't distract me"

責めるつもりはございません。ただ一つ申し上げますと、気づかれずにしていただけると有難いです。=I won't judge you. However, I'd prefer if you stay hidden next time.
It's like "if you want to watch, fine, but don't distract me" ```suggestion 責めるつもりはございません。ただ一つ申し上げますと、気づかれずにしていただけると有難いです。=I won't judge you. However, I'd prefer if you stay hidden next time. ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:26:10 +00:00
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これは……お見苦しいものをお見せして申し訳ございません。=Oh my... I'm sorry you had to see this.
```suggestion これは……お見苦しいものをお見せして申し訳ございません。=Oh my... I'm sorry you had to see this. ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 10:42:50 +00:00
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of->off
Also the MTL of the second sentence was probably better. Here's an alternate suggestion.

汗も汁も綺麗に洗い流し、再び汚し合う……飽きないセックスをするコツの一つですね。=Washing off the sweat and juices only to get dirty again... That's one way to keep the sex from getting old.
`of`->`off` Also the MTL of the second sentence was probably better. Here's an alternate suggestion. ```suggestion 汗も汁も綺麗に洗い流し、再び汚し合う……飽きないセックスをするコツの一つですね。=Washing off the sweat and juices only to get dirty again... That's one way to keep the sex from getting old. ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 10:44:09 +00:00
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ご一緒してもよろしいでしょうか？　あなたと一緒にシャワーを浴びたい気分なんです。=Do you mind if I join you? I'm in the mood to shower with you.
```suggestion ご一緒してもよろしいでしょうか？　あなたと一緒にシャワーを浴びたい気分なんです。=Do you mind if I join you? I'm in the mood to shower with you. ```
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 10:48:48 +00:00
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私も一緒に浴びさせて頂いてもよろしいでしょうか？　もちろん、あなたの精液シャワーをですが。=Can I please share your shower? Your semen shower, to be exact.
```suggestion 私も一緒に浴びさせて頂いてもよろしいでしょうか？　もちろん、あなたの精液シャワーをですが。=Can I please share your shower? Your semen shower, to be exact. ```
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 10:51:44 +00:00
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そちらに泡がついていますよ。　……どうしました？　最初からご一緒していたじゃありませんか。=You've still got some soap there... What? I've been here the whole time.
```suggestion そちらに泡がついていますよ。　……どうしました？　最初からご一緒していたじゃありませんか。=You've still got some soap there... What? I've been here the whole time. ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 10:54:00 +00:00
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わがままを聞いていただき、ありがとうございます。また色々なシャワーを浴びさせていただけると、大変嬉しいです。=Thanks for putting up with me. I would be very happy if we could shower together more often.
```suggestion わがままを聞いていただき、ありがとうございます。また色々なシャワーを浴びさせていただけると、大変嬉しいです。=Thanks for putting up with me. I would be very happy if we could shower together more often. ```
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 10:54:49 +00:00
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それではまた。私は常にあなたのお傍におりますので。=See you later. I'll always be here for you.
```suggestion それではまた。私は常にあなたのお傍におりますので。=See you later. I'll always be here for you.
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 10:56:44 +00:00
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90% sure this line is supposed to be the player being invited in, in which case the MTL was better

90% sure this line is supposed to be the player being invited in, in which case the MTL was better
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:03:29 +00:00
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She's saying she had to rush to the bathroom due to her urges, but not her urge to go to the bathroom. While not literal, this may be more accurate:

我慢が出来ず押し入ってしまいました。我慢が出来なかったのはお手洗いではなく、性欲の方ですが。=I couldn't hold it any longer, so I rushed in here. I don't need to go, I need to come.
She's saying she had to rush to the bathroom due to her urges, but not her urge to go to the bathroom. While not literal, this may be more accurate: ```suggestion 我慢が出来ず押し入ってしまいました。我慢が出来なかったのはお手洗いではなく、性欲の方ですが。=I couldn't hold it any longer, so I rushed in here. I don't need to go, I need to come. ```
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:09:22 +00:00
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精液も溜まっているのではないですか？　ついでに出してスッキリしましょう。精液専用の便器はこちらです。=Do you have a lot of semen in there? You should release it to clear your system. I'll be your cum toilet.
```suggestion 精液も溜まっているのではないですか？　ついでに出してスッキリしましょう。精液専用の便器はこちらです。=Do you have a lot of semen in there? You should release it to clear your system. I'll be your cum toilet. ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:10:26 +00:00
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Make sure ……………… is longer than …………

Make sure `………………` is longer than `…………`
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:12:33 +00:00
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大変おいしゅうございました。ああ、ご挨拶が遅れて申し訳ございません。おはようございます、今日も素敵な一日になると良いですね。=That was very tasty. Oh, sorry for not greeting you sooner. Good morning, I hope you have a wonderful day.
```suggestion 大変おいしゅうございました。ああ、ご挨拶が遅れて申し訳ございません。おはようございます、今日も素敵な一日になると良いですね。=That was very tasty. Oh, sorry for not greeting you sooner. Good morning, I hope you have a wonderful day. ```
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:13:08 +00:00
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おはようございます。……普通に起こすつもりだったのですが、膨らみに気づいた瞬間、己の欲望を抑えきれませんでした。=Good morning... I was going to wake you up normally, but when I saw the bulge, I couldn't hold back.
```suggestion おはようございます。……普通に起こすつもりだったのですが、膨らみに気づいた瞬間、己の欲望を抑えきれませんでした。=Good morning... I was going to wake you up normally, but when I saw the bulge, I couldn't hold back. ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:17:10 +00:00
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"sorry I woke you. Don't move yet, I'm not done"

んっ、ん……お目覚めですか？　朝から失礼しています。んっ、もう少々、そのままお待ちください。=Ahnn.... You're awake? Excuse me for disturbing you this morning. Ahh... Please stay put a little longer.
"sorry I woke you. Don't move yet, I'm not done" ```suggestion んっ、ん……お目覚めですか？　朝から失礼しています。んっ、もう少々、そのままお待ちください。=Ahnn.... You're awake? Excuse me for disturbing you this morning. Ahh... Please stay put a little longer. ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:19:18 +00:00
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勃起した男根を前に何もしないのも無作法かと思いまして……朝からお騒がせしてすみません。=I thought it would be rude to ignore an erect penis... Excuse me for disturbing your morning.
```suggestion 勃起した男根を前に何もしないのも無作法かと思いまして……朝からお騒がせしてすみません。=I thought it would be rude to ignore an erect penis... Excuse me for disturbing your morning. ```
GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:22:19 +00:00
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Did you wake up well? doesn't sound right.

おはようございます、今朝のお目覚めはいかがですか？　……寝ぼけていらっしゃるのでしたら、このまま二回戦を始めましょうか？=Good morning, how are you feeling? ...If you're still sleepy, would you like me to proceed to round two?
`Did you wake up well?` doesn't sound right. ```suggestion おはようございます、今朝のお目覚めはいかがですか？　……寝ぼけていらっしゃるのでしたら、このまま二回戦を始めましょうか？=Good morning, how are you feeling? ...If you're still sleepy, would you like me to proceed to round two? ```
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GeBo1 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:25:08 +00:00
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ぬるりぬるりと這う二つの舌の感触、いかがでしたか？=Did you enjoy the feeling of two wet, slippery tongues sliding all over each other?
```suggestion ぬるりぬるりと這う二つの舌の感触、いかがでしたか？=Did you enjoy the feeling of two wet, slippery tongues sliding all over each other? ```
GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) reviewed 2021-06-15 11:42:29 +00:00
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GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 11:42:29 +00:00
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yeah, mtl does sound better now that i read it after a while, i'll go with that.

yeah, mtl does sound better now that i read it after a while, i'll go with that.
GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) reviewed 2021-06-15 12:12:35 +00:00
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GenericUser394753 (Migrated from github.com) commented 2021-06-15 12:12:35 +00:00
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^ this, now THIS is briliant!

^ this, now THIS is briliant!
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